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Thus I walk by.......

By: runu_aimer Verified Member MouthShut Verified Member | Posted Jul 30, 2010 | General | 597 Views

Whenever I wanted you....you were not there...

Lost in the silence was my happiness..

Happiness comes and goes but the silence is here to stay...

The moon rises far in the forest's lost between the woods and

dense branches...

From somewhere a lonely bird returning home after a long

day...chirps by,sitting on a tall tree.

The dry leaved creak and scream as a girl walks by...

WHo is She? Where is she going surrounded by the blackness of

this dark night??

The cricket,creaks and somewhere faraway a jackle howls...but

she goes on without ever being frightened....

Walks on and on,deep and deep into the woods...

The damp earth underneath the feet looses ground and still she

walks on....

In the far corner a single lamp lights up and on she walks....A

damping wood cracks making a deafening sound and breaking the

SILENCE....!!!

Now I think who the girl is and I see myself....Me along with

the mysteries of the jungle....

Thus I walk by.....

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JaveedAhmedM

Jul 30, 2010 10:46 AM

Keep Walking .... Keep Posting...

Nice Composition and The Twist is good at the End.

Thanks for Sharing the Lines with us.

VelM

Jul 30, 2010 11:54 AM

nice lines..dark forest...owl's in background.
damp woods with crackling sound's and u are for once seeing ur self as the mystery girl..

just amazing...
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Sidz_B

Jul 30, 2010 05:32 PM

mature lines...
U have a knack of writing.. Keep us enriched! :)

and dont get lost in d woods. :P
Sidz

Shalu.D

Aug 03, 2010 04:46 PM

Beautiful lines Shephalee. Your words created a lovely though sad picture in my mind. Hope all is okay.

Keep writing!

hasan777

Aug 04, 2010 09:22 AM

Nice lines with the shade of loneliness and pathos Shephy...Good one to read at..Happiness Always...:)

runu_aimer

Aug 04, 2010 02:22 PM

Thank you all for reading my post......Hi Shalu yeah everything is perfectly fine... :) the post is just a thought :)

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